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It's not like I wanted this.
I truely hate to reminis.
I never asked to hate you, darling.
Yet you made me to...you made me to.
Blackened and lonely...so ever so lonely.
You've broken me...my lovely.
You've broken me.

Oh, I hope you're never whole.
May only horrors reign your soul.
Oh, I hope you suffer as time increases.
May you rest in pieces...
...if you rest at all.

Now I've lain myself to sleep,
No more for thou shall I weep.
And if you die before I wake,
Then, my day, your death shall make.

I trusted your eyes,
I believed your damned lies!
I regret not seeing the snake...
The beast lurking in my love's wake.

Ring around my finger.
Memories tend to linger.
Pieces. Pieces.
May you, Prince, drop dead.
©2006-2009 *PsychoColette
:iconpsychocolette:

Author's Comments

"She had considered the dagger; his breast looked like the perfect place to put it."

While developing a character for a long-forgotten/abandoned story, I came up with this poem. The woman in this "story" had her heart broken and trampled upon. So, she expresses herself (through me, that is ^w^)

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:iconryuura:
Awesome job! I like the mood of the poem, and you picked some nice words and synonyms. <3 Definitly a fav, writing is so underrated at DA... =(

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Want to know how to cure sinful behaviour? Jesus recommends self-mutilation.
Matthew 18: 7-9
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this is great, i love how angry it is... your really good at this

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"Though I know I should be wary, still I venture someplace scary. Ghostly hauntings I turn loose, Beetlejuice, Beetlejuice, BEETLEJUICE!"
Briquin!

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